In the most recent issue of the literary journal, Ninth Letter, an essay appears which pushes our understanding of what an essay is and what it might contain or do or be. Enveloped in a search for quiet, On Silence, by Joshua Schriftman, considers an expanse of information from muses to language; from the decibel to death. The piece is a centrifuge at whose center is Andrea, or love perhaps. (What? I'm a closeted romantic. Step off.) Essentially, the piece is simultaneously soundless and loud in its earnest attempt at internal quiet. If not loud, exactly, then intense. But let's talk about form.
The non-linear narrative offers silence as an elusive character whom our author seeks. In his search, we see two forms of footnotes, a chart, some diagrams and a numeric organizing principle. This fragmented narrative ultimately comprises a layered whole, where we are first compelled by the meditation on silence and later drawn into the story of a relationship and its subsequent failures.
After reading the story, engaging with the forms, I began a post-essay stalk and was happy to find Schriftman on the internets and then-gasp!-a website for On Silence, with sound even. The site is password-protected, so I emailed Schriftman. He generously offered to share the site with me, which basically allows the user to navigate through the essay while experiencing sound, clicking and reading. In other words: it's a manifestation of the form of the essay itself, with moving footnotes and multisensory experiences.
He even answered some questions. Here's a snapshot of our conversation (edited by me; brackets are my inserts):
Can you discuss your process?
My process was about one percent writing and ninety-nine percent revision...I tried to make each [chapter] a sort of complete essay unto itself, and the constant question on my mind was how to maintain a certain tension throughout.
Did you draw the illustrations for this piece?
I didn't draw the illustrations, although I sort of love them. [Ninth Letter] took a rather abstract approach that I think I might have been afraid of attempting [in his website, which has visuals] and doing so with a kind of ironic play on structure and flow. I personally believe their schematics work very with with the text of my essay.
Would you call this an essay?
Yes. [Insert humble commentary and reference to D'Agata.] I think an essay is essentially an experiment, a no-holds-barred attempt to get at something.
What are you reading? Who's influenced you? Any literary journals you're digging?
My current goal is to catch up on my friends' and mentors' writing. I'm halfway through Chuck Kinder's Last Mountain Dancer, which I'm thoroughly enjoying. I've been slowly working my way through a couple of issues of Tin House, and I am indeed digging them. It's worth mentioning that Ander Monson's been an influence, and I've really enjoyed some of the writing at Diagram. [I deleted and reinserted the last sentence about four times, on account of being Ander's advisee.]
[End transcript. And thank you, Joshua.]
What does this mean for the essay as form? The interrogation of moments (or pieces) as a means of comprising something cohesive reflects, I think, the way our minds work. Linear writing has always struck me as more false than other kinds of nonfiction, especially now in the way that information is increasingly accessible to us. Put another way, the combination of forms accurately reflects the human experience, and maybe even offers the most logical container for each piece of the whole. Of course, I have no idea what this might do for the essay; but I do think Schriftman's piece is part of a larger moment in which we investigate the essay.
Now for some design-speak.
Last year, Ninth Letter was presented to me as the literary journal towards which all other journals should strive. More specifically, this was what all journals should look like. And the journal certainly is beautiful and beautifully considered, from ephemera planted in its interior pages to its poster-folded-as-dust jacket exterior. The journal has become an object to be considered, or perhaps a series of objects to comprise a whole.
The journal is the product of a collaboration between the Graduate Creative Writing program and the School of Art + Design at the University of Illinois. Part of the journal's mission is to curate exceptional writing as illuminated by "cutting-edge" graphic design. It should be noted that the journal has been featured in impressive design powerhouses like HOW Magazine and Print Magazine. When the recent issue arrived in my mailbox, I guess I was expecting more pictures.
The journal wants to be experimental and, comparatively, I believe it is in the way that content is considered on the same playing field as form. Undergrads spend an entire semester developing the look of the journal. In this issue, the intention of the designers was to make images that reflect the reading, thereby adding another layer of concept to the work. For instance, in Schriftman's essay, we see sort of abstract diagrams which reference, I think, sound or maybe silence, or even both. But to me, they still feel outside of the essay. They are necessarily separate from the text and this kind of juxtaposition feels slightly forced.
This meditation is not about design so much as images; or, shall we say, the design of writing. Where are the graphic essays at? Where are the pieces that integrate imagery necessarily into the text such that one cannot exist without the other? Is it that this isn't being done? Seeing a photograph alongside text reminds me of the traditional livre d'artist format, where (in one scenario) writers and artists collaborated to create beautiful books, but where each component could be read separately. (See also Arion Press.)
I feel sort of alone in this desire, for words to be smashed with images. But I wonder if this is where the essay might go. Certainly, Ninth Letter moves us in this direction. I just hope for more: more images, more graphic-y writing, more objects falling out of the pages and into our hands. More.